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eric_bean34
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Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 08 Aug 06 2:33 AM
FADE IN:

INT. BOARD ROOM -- LATE AFTERNOON

DARYL GEORGE IS SITTING AT DESK AND STANDS AS BASS ENTERS BOARDROOM

Bass throws UPUD at wall behind Georges head and smashes it

                                                  BASS (moving towards George)
                                                  5 Mr. George.  5 out of 400 Marines survived.  Your ass is mine!

                                                 GEORGE (shocked, scared, stunned)
                                                 But, but, but how?

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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 08 Aug 06 8:13 AM

Sgt. Mj. Tanglefoot (screaming & lunging to stop Bass)

Switch sceen to just outside the boardroom, one MP after another entering into the room, lots of noise.

Fade out to still more MPs entering the room w/ Tanglefoot screaming:
"Bass, by Budda's Balls, let go of that man's throat!"

Leave the Gun, Take the Cannoli
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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 08 Aug 06 1:11 PM
It's better when Chan tells the story later in
Teufel Panzer MK4
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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 11 Aug 06 6:37 PM
Well, it is Chan.
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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 11 Aug 06 7:41 PM
Yea I know that  :P
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