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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 18 Aug 06 3:02 PM
Thank you, it is a work in progress.
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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 18 Aug 06 7:16 PM
One thing... OOH-RAH!
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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 18 Aug 06 7:32 PM
bows humbley
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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 28 Aug 06 1:21 AM
CAPT. CONORADO
All hands now hear this. This is Capt. Conorado, commander of Company L, 34th FIST. Until further notice the Negev Protocol is in effect. If anyone shoots at you or threatens you, you are authorized to use any and all lethal or destructive force necessary to stop whatever threat you are faced with. That is all.

Conorado released all hands.

CAPT. CONORADO
(to Escarpo) Comms, tell the Assualt units to knock down as many of those damn buildings around Delta as they can till the attackers understand it's a bad idea to fuck with my marines.

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Re: Screenplay Teazer
Posted: 02 Sep 06 12:38 AM

Bass looks up using his infra-red lenses spots Bos Kashi in a building, 2nd floor setting up a rocket launcher.

 

BASS

(yelling into comm circuit to be heard)

Hyakowa second floor left!

 

HYAKOWA

On it Bossman!

(on comm circuit)

First team lay fire on, 2nd floor left. Chan grenade those pieces of shit before they can hit us.

 

LEACH

On it!

 

CHAN

Loading grenade!

 

Leach, Goudanis, Dean rain fire on the 2nd floor window and balcony as Chan opens the 203D breach on his rifle and inserts grenade. Chan using laser sight paints the balcony and fires grenade launcher.

 

CHAN (CONT'D)

Fire in the hole!

 

Marines duck heads, except Bass & Hyakowa who are watching arc of the grenade

 

BASS

(on comm circuit to Hyakowa)

That was a good shot

 

HYAKOWA

Damn good I'd say

 

Grenade flies over balcony and sticks to the leg of a Bos Kashi.  Shaking leg, yelling and screaming in fear, grenade explodes in slow motion sending hot plasma fireballs and shrapnel in all directions, burning the Bos Kashi killing them. Burning body parts and burning debree fly from the 2nd floor apartment.

 

BASS

(into comms circuit)

Fire at will men

 

Dragons and Marines open fire at Bos Kashi

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