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eric_bean34
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Re: StarFist MySpace Page
Posted: 05 May 08 9:28 PM
Thanks Dan, Trang has done most of the work.
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Re: StarFist MySpace Page
Posted: 06 May 08 4:58 AM

 eric_bean34 wrote
Thanks Dan, Trang has done most of the work.

You guys are really dedicated to these books.  What you two  & Mike have done on your own is a very high compliment to David and me.

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Re: StarFist MySpace Page
Posted: 06 May 08 5:58 AM
"David and I" not "David and me"
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Re: StarFist MySpace Page
Posted: 06 May 08 10:25 PM
EXT. FLORIDA STATE PARK WOODS - NIGHT

DAN, older man with a PIMPED OUT AR10, slung over his back, shovels dirt into a hole that is fashioned like a grave.

C/U of Dan's face. Sweat runs down his cheek as he smiles.

START FLASHBACK

INT. JEEP WRANGLER - NIGHT
Dan sits in  a JEEP WRANGLER with the driver side window down, across the street from a nice home in a nice neighborhood. An AR10 Silenced Muzzle rests on the door  and points toward the nice home.

THROUGH  EO-TECH 552 RED DOT SIGHT CROSSHAIRS
SKINKIE, a young looking male, with slighlty scaley skin, and a slender tail exits from the front door of the nice house.
                                                                                                      
                                                                                                    DAN(O.S.)
                                                                      David and I, my ass...

A slight muzzle flash with Skinks head simultaniously EXPLODING in a cloud of red spray and ooze.

END FLASHBACK

EXT. FLORIDA STATE PARK WOODS - NIGHT

Dan pats the top of the dirt mound with his shovel laughing hysterically.

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Re: StarFist MySpace Page
Posted: 07 May 08 3:03 AM

 Skink wrote
"David and I" not "David and me"

The best revenge on an obstreperous and callow young stud who presumes to lecture his elders is to educate him, so he realizes how feckless he really is and spends the rest of his short, miserable life slapping his forehad and muttering, "Why didden I tink of dat?"  To determine whether to use "I" or "me," go back and take one of the nouns out of the sentence and see if it makes sense.

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