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Skink
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Seaquel to "Snow Storm"
Posted: 04 Jun 08 6:35 PM Modified By Skink on 6/4/2008 6:37:33 PM)

I am almose done writing Snow Storm a fan fic of starfist ( I have a lot going on in my life and am taking a break. Dan, David how in hell's bell's do you do it?. The 2nd fanfic is about the Skink invasion of Earth and what the 34thFIST does to hold on.

Fake trailer. This is Schultz getting armed for the next battle.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BIUHd-kejAs

 
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Re: Seaquel to "Snow Storm"
Posted: 08 Jun 08 1:11 PM

little confused here, you post about a sequel your righting before you have finished the original? not trying to be a pain, just wondering. Short of your wrestling match with spelling, would be interested to see what you came up with. Are these writing efforts or video/multimedia things your doing?

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Re: Seaquel to "Snow Storm"
Posted: 09 Jun 08 9:46 AM Modified By Skink on 6/9/2008 9:58:15 AM)

Written Fan fic. Not multi media. And I have spell checker to help me out with the spelling problem allthough I am trying to get better at spelling by my self.

Let me tell you all the summery since people tend to forget. And I added a couple of things since then.

1. Skinks get an invasion force and invade certian parts of Thorsfinnie's world

2. Sturgon gets reports of people being killed by acid and decides to fortify New Olso, but in the mean time send hit and run raids where Skinks might be. He sends a report to Genral Aguinaldo and Genral Cazombie and requests re-enforcements ASAP

3. Skinks launch offensive on  New Olso

4. 34th FIST holds out in New Olso

5. The Reenforcements are on there way to Thorsfinnies World. Genral Aguinaldo sends the 26th FIST,33rd, FIST, 25FIST 50th FIST and Genral Cazombie sends the 27th division. 104th division, 343nd Heavy Infantry Division and the 382nd Heavy Infantry Division. Admrial Porter sends two fleets each fleet has four Aircraft carriers

6. The Confederation Navy battles with the Skink Navy in space and most of the Skink navy holds out.

7. The skinks on;y take half of new olso and begin to drill in the center of the city.

8. Skinks uncover a huge portal  and activate it which will lead them to Earth and the Skinks board shuttles to the main skink cruisers.

9. The 34th FIST does the same and follow the Skink Navy into the portal; the Confederation Navy follows not knowing where the Skinks are going.

10. The Skink Navy jumps out of hyper space and is in orbit of Earth and the Confederation Navy is right behind.

11. Seaquel begins.

 
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Re: Seaquel to "Snow Storm"
Posted: 09 Jun 08 4:38 PM Modified By DavidS on 6/9/2008 4:39:49 PM)
Skink,

Yes, you need to use a spell checker. But you can't totally rely on it, it will still miss thing. EG:
A spell checker probably won't tell you that "my self" is actually one word.
It won't tell you that "summery" (meaning "like summer") should be spelled "summary" (synonym for synopsis).
It won't recognize "Thorsfinnie's world" so it won't be able to tell you that "Thorsfinni's" doesn't have an "e" or that "world" should be capitalized.
It probably won't tell you that "mean time" is one word.
It will probably spot "on;y" but might not know what to make of it.

There were a few more in there, but no need to belabor them.

I asked you the first time around, where the hell did the portal come from? They don't exist in the Starfist universe.
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Re: Seaquel to "Snow Storm"
Posted: 09 Jun 08 7:53 PM
I got the idea from Stargate: Atlantis. Of course I could change it and instead of a portal it is something else, like a black hole.
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