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Skink
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Wikipedia
Posted: 12 Apr 08 2:55 PM Modified By Skink  on 4/12/2008 2:56:28 PM)

Should I add any more?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flashfire

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Firestorm_%28novel%29


The Prime Master read the message again. This time, by the time he finished reading, he smiled beatifically. The message included a great deal of information about the Earthman Army and airpower and their tactics. This was inteligence that would serve the Emperor's army well when it next encountered the Earthman Army. As it most assuredly would.......
Finucane
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Re: Wikipedia
Posted: 12 Apr 08 3:21 PM
Skinky, not a bad job!  Congratulations!  One thing, the killing during the riot at the main gate to Ft. Seymour is entirely one-sided, dozens of protesters are killed but not one soldier and it is that which leads the Coalition to issue an ordinance of secession.  You might point out that the alien threat hangs over everything as this war rages.
Trang
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Re: Wikipedia
Posted: 13 Apr 08 5:22 PM

Pretty nice skink, I keep forgetting my wiki login to add anthing to any pages. I would throw out

"Firestorm more concludes than continues, the Ravenette campaign for the 34th fist and the Force Recon (Introduced in Backshot, and expands in Recoil, two books of a three book sub series). The three books(Flashfire,Recoil, Firestorm) converge for one of the most exciting campaigns in the Starfist universe, overshadowed only by the looming alien threat encountered earlier in the series. Strong character development and dialogue, small unit leadership and tactics, outstanding background, all come to bear in the latest installment. The series is another great in Military Sci-Fi genre (set in motion by Heinleins, Starship Troopers) and works from tome to tome to bring the story along, in an extroidinary and engrossing fashion."

I am in no way detracting from anything you have done skink, only adding or helping. I am no wordsmith as you can see, but hope that adding about the three books and the alien skink threat, will lead the reader to the rest of the series.

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Teufel Panzer MK4
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Re: Wikipedia
Posted: 28 Apr 08 12:48 PM
You've done good, my man.
Skink
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Re: Wikipedia
Posted: 28 Apr 08 2:28 PM
Thanks. Can I edit it?
The Prime Master read the message again. This time, by the time he finished reading, he smiled beatifically. The message included a great deal of information about the Earthman Army and airpower and their tactics. This was inteligence that would serve the Emperor's army well when it next encountered the Earthman Army. As it most assuredly would.......
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