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 Confederation Army finally did good
 
Skink
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Confederation Army finally did good
Posted: 14 Mar 09 4:02 PM
I thought the army did a great job on Haulover! I really enjoyed the Arti call. Can we get more of that, Dan your a great author! And David as well. The one thing I didn't get was, why did the Battle Cars have wheels instead of Tracks? Oh well, they did really good.
The Prime Master read the message again. This time, by the time he finished reading, he smiled beatifically. The message included a great deal of information about the Earthman Army and airpower and their tactics. This was inteligence that would serve the Emperor's army well when it next encountered the Earthman Army. As it most assuredly would.......
eric_bean34
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Re: Confederation Army finally did good
Posted: 15 Mar 09 8:00 AM
I would say for greater mobility. Look at the Wart Hog in Halo. By definition it is a battlecar as well.
DavidS
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Re: Confederation Army finally did good
Posted: 16 Mar 09 9:46 AM
Skink, This is twice today I've seen you use "your" for "you're," so I'm going pedantic on you. "Your" is the possessive of you, meaning "belonging to you," "of you," "by you," or similar things "You're" is a contraction for "you are." Your, "Dan your a great author" makes no sense. However, "Dan, you're a great author" is exactly right. Notice the comma following "Dan."
Skink
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Re: Confederation Army finally did good
Posted: 16 Mar 09 9:52 AM
Oh.
The Prime Master read the message again. This time, by the time he finished reading, he smiled beatifically. The message included a great deal of information about the Earthman Army and airpower and their tactics. This was inteligence that would serve the Emperor's army well when it next encountered the Earthman Army. As it most assuredly would.......
eric_bean34
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Re: Confederation Army finally did good
Posted: 16 Mar 09 11:19 PM
And just why is the comma in a sentence so important Skinkie?
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